Well... I wrote this poem when my grandfather passed away 2 months back.. I miss so so very very much... Its mostly bout someone(my grandPa) guiding a young one( me) through the journey of life

Here goes.....

Things, they come,they go,
So do people, later you will know,
That new ones come,
And old ones go.

When new people come,
They bring with them happiness,
But,when the old one goes,
Usually,the surrounding is filled with sorrow.

So we have to be tough,
Because, the road ahead of us is rough,
Twisting and turning, the road of life,
Running around, Like a pair of white mice.

We need guidance,
From people who are nice,
So that we can complete,
The journey through life.

PS:I hope it's good....

wahah im the 1st one to leave a comment...
nice... i agree with ur msg...
» jolenesiah on 2006-11-20 02:31:10

aww...
u must very very very miss himm..
» tMc (60.51.71.140) on 2006-11-20 03:35:12

aiks
at a "be" word there btween must n very..
» tMc (60.51.71.140) on 2006-11-20 03:36:01

Lol... I think even without adding.. it sound good ler.. lol..
» Xboyz on 2006-11-20 03:37:03

-___________-
You miss gramps and still whine about not being able to celebrate your birthday?
» Nuttz on 2006-11-20 05:18:47

Hi
I'm real sorry about your grandpa. The poem was really good, I liked it.
P.S. Thanks for the comment you left on my post. Take Care
» Princess_00 on 2006-11-20 09:09:38

I luv my gramps too!! It's hard to lose someone close to you. Show them you love them while you still can, that's what I always say!
» MsGoodVibes on 2006-11-20 10:59:45

Thank you xboyz for sharing this poem w/us
It is a good poem, your grandfather is surely smiley from above as the poem has surely touched my heart also.
» JMC on 2006-11-20 12:45:29

thx :D
» omgitsemily on 2006-11-20 04:23:34

^^ great poem

p.s. sry bout ur grandfather

» greenlust on 2006-11-21 01:48:45

hmm..
ok then...
» tMc (60.51.68.22) on 2006-11-21 03:01:19

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